Hmm, my OCD self is wondering if I should make one more change to the "Stained Glass" series title. As I said in my previous post, the glass imagery works better as a series title. My question to the readers is: do you think the subtitle works better as "Shattered"? Considering the violence in this story and its aftermath, it could work. The "Shadowed Sun" reference was to the fascination that the G'darrans had with the color of Steve's hair, and the imagery could also work as he's definitely going to be under a shadow.
I'd welcome your opinions. With the "Stained Glass" series title, I can use other glass imagery within the subtitles, or use them in the chapter titles.
It's just a case of my OCD kicking up again (thankfully a mild case!) but I think it could work either way.
Anyway, thanks for your patience and I might change the title once more, otherwise it'll stay the same as it is right now. :)
I know, I'm a crazy person, but it's not easy living with this little peccadillo! *sighs*